Alone...

Alone...

Alone, the rain is hitting ground.
Alone, like echo in the park,
Slow dancing tango all around,
Just shades are melting in the dark.

Alone, the wood is burning down.
Alone, like cigarette in pack.
I am of rustic circus clown,
Who follows old and tired hack.

Alone, in biggest reckless town.
Alone, like broken useless car.
My life is strange, unspoken noun,
Nobody wants pronounce so far.

Alone...


Very Good

Shortly:
Very good.I like it.Splendid!


Nice poem

It has some problems, but I like it anyway.


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